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Created on 6-17-07
Lonesome eyes drift away. Never again to run and play.
Hands caress untainted blue skyes. Forever seaching for not what flies.
Ears detenct even the slightest change. If any, whoever should we blame?
Taste infects our tongue again. Food you eat can kill your friend.
The smell of flowers, the smell of pain. Our glorious moments go down the drain.
Understanding this boundless world. Can change your future quite a wurl.
Please Login to post comments| On June 17th 2007 cmossy2003 Said : | |
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Again, ive tries to fix the way its set up but it just wont fix, anyway please tell me of any thing i could do to make my poem better. :) |
