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Atomic Dance
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Created on 9-25-07
Oh lonely chemical,
pushed around whichever way the forces may take you.
Oh lonely chemical,
when might you find your match; your complement?
When will the world hand over itself to you,
allowing that your desires shall be fulfilled?
Oh lonely chemical,
hold in there until your day of lonliness fades away.
When the season is right for you
that you may withold that which you long for.
Do not stop your tireless search
for the one which fits you best.
For now you are not stable
but soon you shall be.
This when you find your opposite
the one that will balance you out.
And at this time shall you dance together
the rythm of the world in joy.
Your attraction to the other will be strong
that not even the sun can pull apart.
You will dance forever in love and passion
until the time of the end.
Oh lonely chemical,
do not give up; do not give in.
You are an attraction waiting for the moment
when the variables are just right.
Oh lonely chemical,
you will dance with her tonight.
Please Login to post comments| On October 2nd 2007 cmmtx Said : | |
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There is a great beauty in relating two entities. I do not understand it. Nevertheless, the beauty persists. |
| On October 1st 2007 nolenkatie Said : | |
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It was kind of amusing to think of chemicals being lonley and having emotions (I know it is metophorical) but that is when writing is brilliant. I like it alot. |
| On October 1st 2007 cmmtx Said : | |
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What can I say other than "Thank you"? Isn't poetry a beautiful entity? |
| On October 1st 2007 goodgurl8504 Said : | |
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That was so amazingly brilliant! You really put that feeling we all have of finding our "soul mates" into words, and poetic form so precisely! Amazing! Very good job! |
| On September 26th 2007 cmmtx Said : | |
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Thank you for an inspirational complement. :) |
| On September 25th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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I have to admit,this poem was kind-of losing me me until the last three sentences or so. Now, I think it is fantastic. Very creative,and I like how you draw inspiration from varying things that draw your interest and passion and let them flow together |
