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A Simple Man
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Created on 6-12-07
- all my life ive been tought the ways of the common man
- and ive tried to b that simple man
- but no one tells you life is so twisted
- but now im telling you
- its not the life its the ppl in it
- we all have our own meanings for life
- some more than others
- but when yuo realize that this world will never change
- you must ask what has
- and ive come upon the solution that it is the ppl
- we have lost our simple ways
- back when you didnt have to lock your doors
- back when there was a jail and not multiple
- b4 we came upon the solution that money=power
- a simpler time where has it gone lost with its generation
- this world may deteriorate but it is no changing
- we r changing it
Please Login to post comments| On December 29th 2007 DemonzR4eva Said : | |
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you r talking just like my history teacher Mr. Valdiosera he says the same thing all the time awesome poem |
| On July 20th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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insightful,,smart young man u r!! |
| On July 12th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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great poem |
| On June 20th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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It's me again, you should put this back out there, it should get the ratings it deserves... |
| On June 20th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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WOW! THIS POEM NEEDS MORE RATINGS.... I LOVE IT!! I QUOTED A LONG TIM AGO. "THE PEOPLE YOU CHOOSE IN YOUR CIRCLE ARE A REFLECTION OF YOU" THIS REMINDS ME OF THAT... GREAT WRITE... |
