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Created on 9-11-07
- A time of understanding long past due
- I see the pain your going through
- I understand how bad it feels
- And how you came to your solution
- But i cant help but to ask
- Does causing yourself pain fix the pain they have caused
- I know i cant blame you for what your doing
- for then id b a hipicrit
- you know ive done it b4 myself
- dont be like me
- you know that wasnt the real me
- you have said so yourself
- so now for you i say this is not the real you
- To these children of no understanding
- you have fallen in there game
- they have turned you to drugs and alcohol
- to them death is but a game
- i tell you death is not to be feared but is not to be rushed
- now tell me am i the one your gonna trust
- or will you just die and be outta luck
- I tell you this because your my friend
- dont let yourself go through this again
- I saw the pain i caused to you when i did this myself
- So realize the pain that i feel when you realize this
- but just dont care enough to stop
- Ive known you all my life
- sense we were about 2
- Your like family to me understand
- your killing me
- your killing yourself
- and when every1 else realizes what your doing
- then the life will start to desintegrate
- I understand you a product of your enviorment
- but you see where your enviorment is heading
- Take the time to think about it as i did
- do you wanna be your mother
- do you wanna beat your kids
- do you wanna live in a hell hole life
- Do you wanna limit your potential
- to nothing more than dirt as your told
- or do you wanna strive and make your way through this world
- and hold your head up high
- you are worth life your life isnt nothing
- Life is more than it appears
- at such a young age i know you think i kno
- nothing of what i speak
- but believe me i know i have seen it all before
- live has its ups and it has its downs but you must realize
- one life affects another
- Stand strong for your little brothers
- show them how to live a life worth living
- It all starts here and it starts now
- Make a life worth living for yourself
- dont let them eat at you
- for you know you live a life worth living!
Please Login to post comments| On January 3rd 2008 cloud132475860 Said : | |
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lol just so you know the comment below was my cousin heather on mine trying to leave a comment while on my login she isnt smart lol |
| On December 29th 2007 DemonzR4eva Said : | |
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OMGosh i love this A LOT!!!!!!!!!why do you make it where you have the cutters being questioned in some of your poems. suicide is a good thing not bad!!!!ill talk to ya more about this one and some others l8er |
| On December 9th 2007 cloud132475860 Said : | |
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you rock!!!
I loveee you!!!
-heather |
