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didn't think i'd hate somebody this much

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Views (127) Anger Created on 3-7-07 Flag

Congratulations you bloodsucking pig.
I didn't know i could hate this much.
You have opened my eyes,
And made me hate it even more.

You make her cry,
I will watch you bleed.
On your knees, you fucking scum,
And beg for the death that you deserve

She is something to be respected,
Not something to be walked upon.
She is something to be cherished,
And not to be taken for granted

You should be glad she even talks to you
You should be praying that she'll forgive you.
You should be begging for her forgiveness.
Yet somehow... she does everything for you

All i feel is hate,
All i see is her suffering.
I would love to end her suffering
And make you pay for what you've done

You dont deserve to live, you fucking scum.
I'll leave you bleeding.
Don't drown, you bloodsucking pig,
I want you to suffer as she has.

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On August 27th 2008 naenae765 Said :
naenae765 wow. anger. =] lmao.
On May 21st 2007 AngelicExplosi Said :
AngelicExplosi So much anger, I can actually feel the hate for this person and the sympathy and compassion for the girl in the situation. I love it. (:
On May 14th 2007 cjaskot Said :
cjaskot lol geez..i think ill just say wow too..seems to be the popular word for this poem *looks down at the other comments*
On April 29th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 wow..this is really good..
On March 12th 2007 Haeveneyes Said :
Haeveneyes Wow, intense.
On March 9th 2007 Javellef Said :
Javellef Wow! This is an intense poem. Both the anger towards the abuser and the love for his victim come through in the powerful images that you create with your words.