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chubb5

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its original. i promise

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Pain

Created on 2-26-07

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there's something wrong with me
it's obvious
it's apparent
every time something good is there...
it vanishes so fast
"this is it" I'd say
"nothing wrong this time" I said
"what did i do?" was the later thought
"I'm broken. that's all... i'm broken" is the current mindset
no, no don't ask 'cause you care.
last person that cared walked away from me and left me for...
dead
deceased
gone
broken.
get away from me
i don't need your sympathy
i don't want your fake comforts of friendship
i only want to...

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On August 30th 2008 11Dreamgirl11 Said :

	i like it. real gewd Ashley thinks so too / lolz

On August 27th 2008 naenae765 Said :

	dang. i like it.

On August 27th 2008 naenae765 Said :

	dang. i like it.

On August 14th 2008 chubb5 Said :

	it's finished. i just leave it for you, the reader, to imagine :)

On July 7th 2007 hardheadhayley Said :

	omg!! what comes next? what comes next?? lol i loved it !

On June 27th 2007 PoeticPang Said :

	is this unfinished?... so far so good if so,,, i really like the lines that have like,, this sense of thing like ur talking to me,, not at me,, ,, which is good,,, very original poem indeed,,,, each line works well into eachother and the flow is really good,,, great job! ~~~~Pang

On June 4th 2007 OreoCat Said :

	=o this is good, i like it

On May 21st 2007 Caelas Said :

	Deep. Well done.

On March 13th 2007 Sexyshawtie11 Said :

	I like this poem!!=D

On March 9th 2007 Javellef Said :

	Really emotional, full of intense feelings. I could not help but feel the intensity of your words as I them. Great poem!

On March 9th 2007 aprilsue07 Said :

	i like this poem!! :) very... deep! =o) x x

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