chubb5

we all feel like this once in a while

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Created on 2-21-07

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sit on the sidelines
watch it unfold
take it account
write it all down

Now i realize what i have done
i have hurt myself just to do it again
Now i know why we do what we do
just to cause pain and end suffering

watch you go by
remember whats gone
try to amend
shove it all in

one to show what pain i have caused
add another for what i am
make a third for what i will do
and finally a fourth for what i've become

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On June 27th 2007 PoeticPang Said :

	"take into account?"... sounds better,,,, hmmmm,,, hmmmmm.. hmmmmmm............. i sort of get what ur trying to explain,,, in a way u are either regretting (a) mistake or ,,,,,, trying to make up for it......... damn,, it's either me or ur confusing me,,, idk which,,, i can't seem to understand the last paragraph,,, it doesn't seem to fit in with the rest,, and i'm starting to doubt i get what ur saying here.... urgh.....?_?

On March 9th 2007 Javellef Said :

	I really like what you say in this poem. Yes, I have said things similar to what you say in your poem when I have repeated the same hurtful mistakes.