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When I look into your eyes I see a river
of love, baby turtle doves circle from above
sent from heaven, given to me, you've made
me happy, you've made me free, I have no
words to say how I feel, but one thing I
know, all this is real.

You touched my heart, opened my eyes,
you made me wonder but also realize
my love for you will always be true
not a day goes by where I don't think of
you.

I'll love you now, I'll love you forever,
me and you, together as one, our hearts
intertwined, we breathe as one, our minds
alike, now you realize, now you see
me and you were meant to be.

I'll let you be happy, I'll let you be free
all what Ive written, all what Ive said
gives you some clue, there's not a thing
I wouldn't do for you.

I promise to love you and forever care,
when ever you need me I'll always be there,
that is my promise from me to you because
I don't know what id do if I didn't have you.

My life's now complete and my hearts dancing
on heavens street, because I found you,
my one true love until death do us part,
so from this day forward I give you my heart.


I end this poem with love and care,
but one last thing I want you to know,
I really really love you so.
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On September 30th 2008 PRiiSCiiLLA Said :
PRiiSCiiLLA this is so sweet (: I really like it.
On December 28th 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Awwh, sweet poem, once again I'm wondering if you ever send one of these poems to a lucky lady?
On December 26th 2007 mistdarklight Said :
mistdarklight awe, your love poems are so cute :)
On August 27th 2007 HRHHermione Said :
HRHHermione Very nice!
On August 27th 2007 babiiigurl88 Said :
babiiigurl88 this one reminds me of somethign james blunt would sing...dont worry i mean that as a complament (i like james blunt)
On June 15th 2007 cuteness66 Said :
cuteness66 i love this one.. your a good writer. and you should continue to write.. anywayz i hope you will give me some pointers and come read my poems.. thanx and your poem is great..
On June 9th 2007 individulsong Said :
individulsong nice job. very touching.
On May 24th 2007 drowningnlove Said :
drowningnlove I really like this one! I've read it before but havent commented. eally good stuff! Thumbs up!!!
On May 22nd 2007 christopher199 Said :
christopher199 haha keep the comments comin
On May 19th 2007 frodoismyname Said :
frodoismyname hey baby, that's was gorgeous!!!! ♥ u ♥ u ♥ u ♥ u!
On May 13th 2007 GIL456 Said :
my picture
I LOVE IT IT MADE ME CRY
On May 12th 2007 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet beautiful!
On May 12th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I like it a lot~
On May 12th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg This is really sweet.....lucky girl.
On May 12th 2007 xxdeligirlxx Said :
xxdeligirlxx It wandered off a bit in the middle, but it was good. Thumbs up!
On May 12th 2007 frodoismyname Said :
frodoismyname that's sweet. niice. could u chekc out my stuff??
On May 12th 2007 darkness6191 Said :
darkness6191 ooooo i love you too;)in the least gay way:)
On May 12th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo I love it. Good stuff!