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The way i feel
I hope you know you make me feel
a thousand different feelings
I hope you know you make me smile
even while you’re far away
I hope you know I miss you,
every single day.
I hope you know when you leave me,
you leave me wanting more.
I hope you know I’m worried,
I’ve seen this all go wrong before.
I hope you know the thought of you
keeps me up at night
I hope you know people say that I care too much about you.
I think they might be right.
I hope you know I hear you say
some things I’ve never heard.
I hope you know that while this is just another stupid love poem,
I mean every single word.
| On March 29th 2008 simone0704 Said : | |
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this is great!! I guess you've been through the same situation.:D it's a good thing that it sounds like you made it for yourself. Coz when someone makes a poem, you're not supposed just make it coz you think it's what other people want to hear/read:D |
| On December 11th 2007 CRISSY10012 Said : | |
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great i lurv ur work and it always matches what i feel |
| On September 8th 2007 danielftlew Said : | |
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I've got two words for you:
Hallmark Card.
Not that it's a bad thing... truthfully without converting into a song, it's about the only way a poet can make a living. Think about it. |
| On August 27th 2007 babiiigurl88 Said : | |
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aww. thats so sweet. that is awesome! |
| On August 14th 2007 nwirotod Said : | |
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like it |
| On July 29th 2007 fedogg Said : | |
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great man
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| On July 23rd 2007 meandyouislove Said : | |
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i like this its really good it reminds me of the way i am with my boyfriend and this saids how i feel great poem!!!! |
| On May 21st 2007 Sabbrena Said : | |
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awwwwwwww.....how sweet... |
| On May 7th 2007 sammyannolivel Said : | |
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great ;) |
| On May 6th 2007 natajsha715 Said : | |
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I like this poem it really good!!! |
| On May 6th 2007 HerIsHeartless Said : | |
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Very pretty, not most guys have this ablity to show real feelings... |
| On May 5th 2007 goldfishmurder Said : | |
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Great. |
| On April 29th 2007 bloodredangel7 Said : | |
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that is sweet |
| On April 29th 2007 christopher199 Said : | |
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get away from me sicko |
| On April 28th 2007 suckmypussy601 Said : | |
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so you do love me chris? wow. im sorry for trashing your girlfriend and stuff but i just really care for u i think everyhting about you is amazing. i just want u to know that. and that i couldnt live without you chris. i love you |
| On April 28th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Great stuff. |
| On April 28th 2007 SoulRevival18 Said : | |
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so adorable!! really... so cute! |
| On April 25th 2007 Trippaholic Said : | |
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww |
| On April 24th 2007 bandgeekjessi Said : | |
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awwwww its so adorable! |
| On April 21st 2007 Spikecollecter Said : | |
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Very nice |
| On April 15th 2007 glamourgore Said : | |
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The first line seems out of place, but I think that is because it doesnt fall into the rhyme scheme. Nice work none the less. |
| On April 15th 2007 imbored9909 Said : | |
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nice |
| On April 14th 2007 drowningnlove Said : | |
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great poem |
| On April 3rd 2007 smexyskittles Said : | |
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how awesome. |
| On March 21st 2007 kya17 Said : | |
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i think i rated all your poems but i never commented. so i will comment and rate =] so this is a good poem keep it up :) |


