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really touching

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Created: 01/13 2007
Views: 2291
Category: Love

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The way i feel

I hope you know you make me feel
a thousand different feelings

I hope you know you make me smile
even while you’re far away

I hope you know I miss you,
every single day.

I hope you know when you leave me,
you leave me wanting more.

I hope you know I’m worried,
I’ve seen this all go wrong before.

I hope you know the thought of you
keeps me up at night

I hope you know people say that I care too much about you.
I think they might be right.

I hope you know I hear you say
some things I’ve never heard.

I hope you know that while this is just another stupid love poem,
I mean every single word.

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On March 29th 2008 simone0704 Said: 
simone0704 this is great!! I guess you've been through the same situation.:D it's a good thing that it sounds like you made it for yourself. Coz when someone makes a poem, you're not supposed just make it coz you think it's what other people want to hear/read:D
On December 11th 2007 CRISSY10012 Said: 
CRISSY10012 great i lurv ur work and it always matches what i feel
On September 8th 2007 danielftlew Said: 
danielftlew I've got two words for you: Hallmark Card. Not that it's a bad thing... truthfully without converting into a song, it's about the only way a poet can make a living. Think about it.
On August 27th 2007 babiiigurl88 Said: 
babiiigurl88 aww. thats so sweet. that is awesome!
On August 14th 2007 nwirotod Said: 
nwirotod like it
On July 29th 2007 fedogg Said: 
fedogg great man
On July 23rd 2007 meandyouislove Said: 
meandyouislove i like this its really good it reminds me of the way i am with my boyfriend and this saids how i feel great poem!!!!
On May 21st 2007 Sabbrena Said: 
Sabbrena awwwwwwww.....how sweet...
On May 7th 2007 sammyannolivel Said: 
sammyannolivel great ;)
On May 6th 2007 natajsha715 Said: 
natajsha715 I like this poem it really good!!!
On May 6th 2007 HerIsHeartless Said: 
HerIsHeartless Very pretty, not most guys have this ablity to show real feelings...
On May 5th 2007 goldfishmurder Said: 
goldfishmurder Great.
On April 29th 2007 bloodredangel7 Said: 
bloodredangel7 that is sweet
On April 29th 2007 christopher199 Said: 
christopher199 get away from me sicko
On April 28th 2007 suckmypussy601 Said: 
my picture
so you do love me chris? wow. im sorry for trashing your girlfriend and stuff but i just really care for u i think everyhting about you is amazing. i just want u to know that. and that i couldnt live without you chris. i love you
On April 28th 2007 ausjo Said: 
ausjo Great stuff.
On April 28th 2007 SoulRevival18 Said: 
SoulRevival18 so adorable!! really... so cute!
On April 25th 2007 Trippaholic Said: 
Trippaholic awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
On April 24th 2007 bandgeekjessi Said: 
bandgeekjessi awwwww its so adorable!
On April 21st 2007 Spikecollecter Said: 
Spikecollecter Very nice
On April 15th 2007 glamourgore Said: 
glamourgore The first line seems out of place, but I think that is because it doesnt fall into the rhyme scheme. Nice work none the less.
On April 15th 2007 imbored9909 Said: 
imbored9909 nice
On April 14th 2007 drowningnlove Said: 
drowningnlove great poem
On April 3rd 2007 smexyskittles Said: 
smexyskittles how awesome.
On March 21st 2007 kya17 Said: 
kya17 i think i rated all your poems but i never commented. so i will comment and rate =] so this is a good poem keep it up :)