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The way i feel

Views (2117) Love Created on 1-13-07 Flag

I hope you know you make me feel
a thousand different feelings

I hope you know you make me smile
even while you’re far away

I hope you know I miss you,
every single day.

I hope you know when you leave me,
you leave me wanting more.

I hope you know I’m worried,
I’ve seen this all go wrong before.

I hope you know the thought of you
keeps me up at night

I hope you know people say that I care too much about you.
I think they might be right.

I hope you know I hear you say
some things I’ve never heard.

I hope you know that while this is just another stupid love poem,
I mean every single word.

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On March 29th 2008 simone0704 Said :
simone0704 this is great!! I guess you've been through the same situation.:D it's a good thing that it sounds like you made it for yourself. Coz when someone makes a poem, you're not supposed just make it coz you think it's what other people want to hear/read:D
On December 11th 2007 CRISSY10012 Said :
CRISSY10012 great i lurv ur work and it always matches what i feel
On September 8th 2007 danielftlew Said :
danielftlew I've got two words for you: Hallmark Card. Not that it's a bad thing... truthfully without converting into a song, it's about the only way a poet can make a living. Think about it.
On August 27th 2007 babiiigurl88 Said :
babiiigurl88 aww. thats so sweet. that is awesome!
On August 14th 2007 nwirotod Said :
nwirotod like it
On July 29th 2007 fedogg Said :
fedogg great man
On July 23rd 2007 meandyouislove Said :
meandyouislove i like this its really good it reminds me of the way i am with my boyfriend and this saids how i feel great poem!!!!
On May 21st 2007 Sabbrena Said :
Sabbrena awwwwwwww.....how sweet...
On May 7th 2007 sammyannolivel Said :
sammyannolivel great ;)
On May 6th 2007 natajsha715 Said :
natajsha715 I like this poem it really good!!!
On May 6th 2007 HerIsHeartless Said :
HerIsHeartless Very pretty, not most guys have this ablity to show real feelings...
On May 5th 2007 goldfishmurder Said :
goldfishmurder Great.
On April 29th 2007 bloodredangel7 Said :
bloodredangel7 that is sweet
On April 29th 2007 christopher199 Said :
christopher199 get away from me sicko
On April 28th 2007 suckmypussy601 Said :
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so you do love me chris? wow. im sorry for trashing your girlfriend and stuff but i just really care for u i think everyhting about you is amazing. i just want u to know that. and that i couldnt live without you chris. i love you
On April 28th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Great stuff.
On April 28th 2007 SoulRevival18 Said :
SoulRevival18 so adorable!! really... so cute!
On April 25th 2007 Trippaholic Said :
Trippaholic awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
On April 24th 2007 bandgeekjessi Said :
bandgeekjessi awwwww its so adorable!
On April 21st 2007 Spikecollecter Said :
Spikecollecter Very nice
On April 15th 2007 glamourgore Said :
glamourgore The first line seems out of place, but I think that is because it doesnt fall into the rhyme scheme. Nice work none the less.
On April 15th 2007 imbored9909 Said :
imbored9909 nice
On April 14th 2007 drowningnlove Said :
drowningnlove great poem
On April 3rd 2007 smexyskittles Said :
smexyskittles how awesome.
On March 21st 2007 kya17 Said :
kya17 i think i rated all your poems but i never commented. so i will comment and rate =] so this is a good poem keep it up :)