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monday to friday
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Created on 9-4-07
Tell me why I don’t like Monday?
Cause I was scoring a zero
Then I met that mystery girl
And soon became a hero
Tuesday was a good day
I was having fun
I could not believe my luck
I got to number one
Wednesday things were dreamy
I told you that I love you
Soon things got steamy
And I got to number two
By Thursday were getting hot
You said that you loved me
What you did hit the spot
I made it to number three
Friday, and her family left
The news was just in
No one could believe it
I hit number four
Cause I was scoring a zero
Then I met that mystery girl
And soon became a hero
Tuesday was a good day
I was having fun
I could not believe my luck
I got to number one
Wednesday things were dreamy
I told you that I love you
Soon things got steamy
And I got to number two
By Thursday were getting hot
You said that you loved me
What you did hit the spot
I made it to number three
Friday, and her family left
The news was just in
No one could believe it
I hit number four
Please Login to post comments| On July 18th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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i like it :) |
| On February 19th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very good |
| On December 28th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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lol very nice, rather smooth >=)! |
| On October 29th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Lol. Very Craig David '7 Nights'. Like it. |
| On September 22nd 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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hey this is good :P |
| On September 21st 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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haha,, this one reminds me of that one song.. uhm,, hmmmrr.,, how did it go?.. i forgot but it had some similiar wordings and form methods..... very well done,,, the rhymes where abit off,, but it just added to a better quality of rhythmic touch... i wonder what happened on the weekends tho?.. hmmm??? |
