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In class thinking about two ppl.Rate this Poem
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Created on 5-17-07
Cut me with your harsh lies
Thats ok
As my blood flows just as your lies shoot out
Thats ok
But don't for one second believe that you've killed who I really am
You may trample my dreams
But like the salt of my tears evaporate they rise lighter than dust...
just as i rise stronger like brick walls... that block your bitter lies.
For one friend... one person is there..
Hold me close!
With lips pale and still..my old love for you dies..
But my friend be still.. for you do not know how longingly i seek your presence.
You come to me like day dreams of a sweet lover
For you i wait
I wont doubt that I will meet you
To make sure I'll never loose you.
Thats ok
As my blood flows just as your lies shoot out
Thats ok
But don't for one second believe that you've killed who I really am
You may trample my dreams
But like the salt of my tears evaporate they rise lighter than dust...
just as i rise stronger like brick walls... that block your bitter lies.
For one friend... one person is there..
Hold me close!
With lips pale and still..my old love for you dies..
But my friend be still.. for you do not know how longingly i seek your presence.
You come to me like day dreams of a sweet lover
For you i wait
I wont doubt that I will meet you
To make sure I'll never loose you.
This poem in the beginning was written for someone that puts me down a lot... and then in the end... its for my best friend he has been there for me a lot.. ^_^ this poem is just me thinking i guess...AS USUAL haha.
Please Login to post comments| On June 2nd 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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I like how you think! :) |
| On May 28th 2008 lildevil357 Said : | |
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This is a good poem, I like it. ;) |
| On May 20th 2008 GangstaSam89 Said : | |
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I liked this poem, it was awsome. |
| On May 2nd 2008 Foreverlyn Said : | |
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Deep. |
| On August 22nd 2007 emily28793 Said : | |
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awsum as poem |
| On July 20th 2007 Ericnessxo Said : | |
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Hey, Awesome Poemms keep up the good work Buddie♥ Woot. Feel free to Look at some of mine. Ericnessxo =) |
| On June 23rd 2007 darkmatters Said : | |
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wicked |
| On June 10th 2007 hayahayate Said : | |
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I love it1 |
| On June 7th 2007 withoutacause4 Said : | |
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well if thats jus you thinking i wish i thought like that |
| On June 5th 2007 Jush Said : | |
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i really enjoyed reading this poem. =D |
| On June 5th 2007 charissa14 Said : | |
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as usaul...lol...this is really great. i got confused at first but when i read it again it was easier to comprehend. lol |
| On June 2nd 2007 SoulRevival18 Said : | |
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nice work! really sweet piece! |
| On May 25th 2007 bigdickfrank Said : | |
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that was a really nice poem i liked it |
| On May 24th 2007 Univarsity Said : | |
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I like this poem. It is very similar to my "Love Hurts" Poem. Very profound in language and expression. Keep up the good work. |
| On May 24th 2007 CLP64 Said : | |
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very nice =) |
