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A wasted life
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Created on 4-26-07
A wasted life?
Is there such a thing?
A wasted life..
Like a leaf falling down in the middle of the creak
floating along...
A wasted life...
wrapping yourself as a calipilar does
but never to see daylight..
A wasted life...
feeling lonely but wanting to say something...
your eyes pouring with words but yet no one reads them...
A wasted life...
Shouting invisible screams... do you hear?
No...
Is there such a thing as a wasted life?
yes...
A life full of sorrow, pain, fear,mistrust.
A wasted life
Wanting to observe whats around.
Swinging on a hammock
Reaching down to the cold grass...
She turns her head to the empty dark house.
Tears streaming down her face..
She has wasted her life.
Please Login to post comments| On December 2nd 2007 RalRasper Said : | |
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i really like this, you have some real talent, and yer pretty |
| On September 27th 2007 Mechiemo Said : | |
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dude...that is so true...
i like it... |
| On September 16th 2007 ilovesouthlyon Said : | |
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aawwee sad but i really like it..very deep
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| On August 18th 2007 grace2bebetter Said : | |
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very nice but i hope,you know bad things will pas just like a storm does. |
| On June 5th 2007 charissa14 Said : | |
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this poem really made me feel like i was there. |
| On May 24th 2007 sammyannolivel Said : | |
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i love this.. |
| On May 17th 2007 amptone Said : | |
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Great poem, I would comment on more but I am not sure what to say, but they are all really greatly structured and emotional! |
| On May 9th 2007 CLP64 Said : | |
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wow.. Thats real deep |
| On May 7th 2007 PeAcEnotPiEcEs Said : | |
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sad, but good. very loverly. |
| On May 7th 2007 PostPlaya Said : | |
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nice poem.... :D |
| On May 2nd 2007 yummyyumcandy Said : | |
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that was so amazing i love it great no splended no excellent job |
| On May 1st 2007 xoFrUiTlOoPxo Said : | |
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hey thanks for the comments... ur poems are AH-MAZING!! i love them especially this one! congrats ur #1 this week! keep it up. u got talent girl! u got talent! :D |
| On May 1st 2007 941Babiigiirl Said : | |
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i love it.... sounds like me. lol. greta writing! |
| On May 1st 2007 SoulRevival18 Said : | |
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fantastic! you are a great poet as well! |
| On May 1st 2007 thatbluewoman Said : | |
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WOWZA!!! this is fabulouss!! |
