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Created on 4-16-07
charming views of light
holding her tears close
radient gleam that presses against her cheek
ice cold it turns as darkness wraps around her like a blanket
seeing as light rolls away
eluminating hope that makes her hazel eyes glow
lonely she is..
lost in this world as she disolves in it
ending her future in this world, she sleeps
Please Login to post comments| On February 13th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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very good : ) |
| On April 20th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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aw that's pretty... |
| On April 16th 2007 isdrowning Said : | |
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hmm... i think this is the best thing i've read today, but that's not saying too much, no offense. the imagery was very clear. i wish it was longer! otherwise, nice. you have my vote. |
| On April 16th 2007 AtotheFI Said : | |
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hmmm...you've gotz lots of potentialz hehe..I think anyway..How long've you been writting for? |
| On April 16th 2007 gabbes Said : | |
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Another dissident.... :) |
