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Darkness falls

Views (507) Pain Created on 3-10-07 Flag

I look down, I see my heart upon the floor, as if someone tore it out of my body, my soul in the darkest place that there could be. No soul no heart. What am I? Just a sack of skin on bones? If I have no soul or heart then why do I feel that pain. The pain of remembering the day you left me. I loved you so much. Why? Why must this happen to me over and over again. Wern;t we made for eachother? All those nights we stayed up talking, All those letters we sent each other. Don’t they mean something? I stand here, with darkness swallowing my body, unable to dust it off me. With just the memory of you leaving me. The memory that will always be there as it grows inside me. Eating me internaly! When will all this pain end? I sit here in the dark wait and cry in pain.

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On November 11th 2007 martianmike Said :
martianmike very expressive
On June 16th 2007 staceybroken1 Said :
staceybroken1 i think this poem is really good keep it up
On June 6th 2007 puckettn67 Said :
puckettn67 deep. i like it
On May 9th 2007 CLP64 Said :
CLP64 yea... ive felt that plenta times
On April 26th 2007 Darkrisky Said :
Darkrisky god i know that feeling...i feel it every day and you captured it so well
On April 25th 2007 lilyqueen777 Said :
lilyqueen777 wow i could feel the pain beautiful :P
On April 20th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx aww that is sad
On April 15th 2007 spasm01 Said :
spasm01 i like it,an odd choice of formation though
On April 12th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Very deep and I can honestly say I've been there before!
On April 2nd 2007 SN0W Said :
SN0W great! just another marvelous peom written by you!
On April 2nd 2007 ivy81 Said :
ivy81 nice I like it I'd make it formated though^^
On March 31st 2007 DaCiscoKid Said :
DaCiscoKid 1st off,who would leave you?DUMDASS!I love it.:-)
On March 26th 2007 hillbilleechic Said :
hillbilleechic damn girl, you are really talented. this is so powerful. i wish i could write like this. i cant write poems or anything like that for shit. lol this was really good.
On March 11th 2007 gabbes Said :
gabbes kewl
On March 10th 2007 Slayer456 Said :
Slayer456 thats awesome i love the part where you said I look down, I see my heart upon the floor, as if someone tore it out of my body, it was awesome