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Me. |
you lost him...
you cut yourself,
but you dont know why.
you blame yourself,
and start to cry.
inflicting pain because you cared,
and now not only are you scared,
you feel the shame and defeat,
and now theres blood stains on your sheet.
you finally felt loved and guidance,
only to be left with silence.
you wish he could come back to you,
just to tell him "i love you."
but now he's gone,
and not coming back.
he's the one thing that you lack.
try not to cut,
try not to blame,
i know one day you'll be ok...
never forget them,
dont even try,
because i know what will happen,
you'll start to cry.
| On November 8th 2007 michael4864785 Said : | |
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Not bad chocohott. I agree the last four lines really are good. |
| On November 3rd 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Very good. I really like it. The last four lines really stand out. Great job. |


