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Disfigured Reflection
When I look in the mirror,
I see a young girl growing into a women.
When I look in the mirror,
I see a friendly Smile,
But thats not what you see,
Because all you see is,
My disfigured reflection.
But All These Things In,
My disfigured reflection,
All come together to make one thing,
And one thing ony,
Me.
So tell me when you look at me,
Do you see who I really am?
Or just the scattered pieces,
Of my disfigured reflection.
Amanda Marie Werden
| On January 21st 2008 CharTheKnight Said : | |
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This is amazing and gives an excellent example of a short poem that is worth much more than the length. |
| On January 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I love this! Our inner beauty is what counts! |
| On January 11th 2008 PoeticPang Said : | |
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ooohhh,, nice wording,, abit too much of the same meaning with different wordings,, but i do get what u mean behind it,, instead of using "mirror" or "reflection" try out different words and even some metaphors to give a more profound oomph out of what u really want the reader to read.... but u know,, sometimes mirrors lie... when u look into them ,, different mirrors reflect out different images of YOU, just like ur friends and people around u see,, everyone sees abit differently and only YOU have that chance to see the real YOU thru their eyes... so i'd suggest to not look in mirrors,, the glares and sparkles in others eyes are better reflections, they don't lie (unless ur friend's are untrustworthy,, then that might not work out so well,,, eeehh),, well done on poem,, i might take a look back on some of ur others another time,, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |


