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I Really Care
I have done something bad again,
I am not quite sure what I have done.
My mommy just started yelling at me
And then the pain had begun.
She started screaming in my face
and calling me very mean names.
She started hitting me very hard
And telling me I should be ashamed.
I told her that I loved her
But she doesn’t seem to understand
That I will to do so much for her love
And how hard I try to follow her commands.
I wish she would learn
That everyone makes mistakes.
I want her to know that when she yells at me
It really, really aches
Soon the pain on the outside will disappear
But the pain on the inside will always be there
So all I can really do is hope that one-day she will realize
How much I really care.[Editors note; I just have not been proud of my poems lately. I hope that I am wrong.]
| On April 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Aww~ this is amazing Jade. You didn't tell me of any new ones ~elbow~ =) I really love it lots. |
| On April 25th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I hope this isn't a true story! The second paragraph dosen't ryme. But OMG I really like this poem! :) |


