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meant to be
So I had a best friend.
He was one of a kind.
It was like he knew everything about me
And he was always on my mind.
Then he started doing these things
That really drove me crazy.
Like telling me he loved me
And calling me his baby.
I didn’t know if he was serious,
Did he really love me?
I really thought he meant it
But there was no guarantee.
So one day I told him
That I loved him too.
He looked at me and smiled
like he already knew.
I was a little unsure of our relationship
But then he told me he would always love me
And at that moment I knew we would last forever
And I knew that we were really meant to be.

| On April 5th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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Wow i love this one !!!!!! |
| On March 23rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love this one! I like the part where your calling him crazy for calling you baby :) Nice job~ |
| On March 23rd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I really liked it! The second paragraph was a lil off. But no really I like it ALOT! ~Kudos~ |
| On March 22nd 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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Not that great, but, then again, none of my poems are. :]
but, enjoy! |


