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My first true love

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So, there was this boy…

And I like him very much.

I liked the way he looked at me,

And I liked the way we touched.

 

Then one day he told me…

That he liked this other girl.

I asked him if he loved her,

And he told me “she’s my world”.

 

But, little did he know,

That broke my little heart.

I thought we had something special…

From the very start.

 

I guess we just weren’t meant to be.

I didn’t know he would be so hard to let go of…

But, I know one little thing…

He will always be my first true love.
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On August 6th 2008 Alli684 Said :
Alli684 I like this one too!
On March 14th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Wow, this was perfect.
On March 14th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x Wow I think this poem is great!
On March 13th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 I love it
On March 7th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 hmm.. ok. I just realized that I said "little" about three times. is that too much? lol. :] thank you guyss!
On March 5th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Aww~ sad. I love the poem though good wording and everything. :)
On March 1st 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Aww We all went threw that. I think you could take this, and make a story out of it. You just inspired to make a story similar to this. So thank you!