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My first true love
So, there was this boy…
And I like him very much.
I liked the way he looked at me,
And I liked the way we touched.
Then one day he told me…
That he liked this other girl.
I asked him if he loved her,
And he told me “she’s my world”.
But, little did he know,
That broke my little heart.
I thought we had something special…
From the very start.
I guess we just weren’t meant to be.
I didn’t know he would be so hard to let go of…
But, I know one little thing…
He will always be my first true love.| On August 6th 2008 Alli684 Said : | |
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I like this one too! |
| On March 14th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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Wow, this was perfect. |
| On March 14th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Wow I think this poem is great! |
| On March 13th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I love it |
| On March 7th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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hmm.. ok.
I just realized that I said "little" about three times.
is that too much?
lol. :]
thank you guyss! |
| On March 5th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Aww~ sad. I love the poem though good wording and everything. :) |
| On March 1st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Aww We all went threw that. I think you could take this, and make a story out of it. You just inspired to make a story similar to this. So thank you! |


