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Alone
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Created on 6-2-07
Alone
a single word describes my living
my way of life
life without you
this life of mine
you live the same
away from me
but still your true
time with you
makes my heart sing
you lift me up
with joy you bring
my lonesome tears
they fall like rain
but still I know
we'll meet again
Please Login to post comments| On June 6th 2008 audica Said : | |
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ooh! i love the ending! |
| On April 13th 2008 sweetkelli16 Said : | |
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amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On February 23rd 2008 jenni24014 Said : | |
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again, a beautiful, relateable poem! love it! |
| On February 19th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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I like it.. |
| On August 8th 2007 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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i understand where your coming from |
| On August 2nd 2007 HuntedAngels Said : | |
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I can understand what you mean in this... |
| On July 18th 2007 7unicornrings Said : | |
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aw its so beautiful!! i love ur poems!! great job sauce! lol ^_^ |
| On July 6th 2007 Courtroy Said : | |
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wow, this is so good!!!!! breaks my heart in so many ways! |
| On June 22nd 2007 amanda710faith Said : | |
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aww thats really cute and beautifully written =) |
| On June 15th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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very lonesome,,,,,,,,, makes me sad inside,,,,, very touching poem,,, great use of metaphors,,, hmmmmmm.......... it's really simple... i guess that makes it pretty damn good,,,, great job!~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On June 14th 2007 purplecouch Said : | |
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its good, and im here now |
| On June 7th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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aww I really like it! good job! |
| On June 6th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Awesome poem....I love the feeling that comes from reading this...I know we can all relate to this poem at one time or another. |
| On June 5th 2007 Karaokekat Said : | |
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I like it |
| On June 5th 2007 crazeedaze Said : | |
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i really love this one.. |
| On June 4th 2007 crotchrotwedgy Said : | |
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very well writen and heart felt. The flow is steady with no hang ups. Great poem 8) |
| On June 3rd 2007 lovetheshinys Said : | |
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nice...u really pour your feelings into you poetry. i love it. beautiful! |
| On June 3rd 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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This is just beautiful. I wish I could write like this. Wow! |
| On June 2nd 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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please let me know what you think. |
