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the damned

Views (76) Worry Created on 5-30-08 Flag

when all law is gone and humanities ceased

the fairytale heaven is not over filled

it grows and grows and grows 

till it seems no earth there ever was

heaven and hell have begun to swell

not even pergatory exists

the final judjement has been made

lets see how everyone in heaven is

shall we?

faces uknown faces unneeded

a few i know but so many

crowding around and walking by

so close i should trip

i turn around 

pretty much th...HEY LOOK OUT!

a head on collision my eyes shut to calm me

no falling no ground

huh? my eyes open i turn again

he walked right through me

no one knows im here

they dont see me

im not here at all

my silkin robe stiffens

 my halo melts and

my wings burn away

like they were in...

 oh no

i raise my gaze

i see people crying

there tears are different

clear tears leave bloody trails

the blood never dries

an eternal scar is burned

the faces of many are deformed

i move about and notice something

people here see me but there expressions

fear and hatred in the after life too

but no one here insults me

the labor they are put through

uuuggggghhhhh

excruciating

i continue to roam about 

i feel uncomfortable

yet for the first time

i feel like i belong

i see a door

i go through

HUH?

oh man

i see me and theres satan

but in the throne is me

and satan is kneeling

its not me

a fain of great power

took my image

in help to me

or to go against me

i dont really know 

i listen and hear this

"this is your prize for such

a demented little soul"

thanks says the fain

"goodbye my liege"

when satans gone

a voice calls

"yes its true

you rule over the

underworld"

i dont believe this

thats not me

I tag the raptured

I tag the damned

I give the orders 

I know this is true

i look the fake in the eyes

a sneer spreads across its face

winds blow and rocks fall

everything is silent

i challenge the fain

to a battle of souls 

sure says the fain

the duel never begins

fains have no souls

therefor it lost

all the pain and torture

im so unfamiliar

i sit in the throne

thinking perhaps

i remember now

ive been here all along

i never left my throne

this is my doing

the door opens

and in comes satan

he kneels before me

"this is your prize for

such a demented little soul"

thanks i say

"goodbye my liege"

he leaves me in the throne room

i call out as if someones there

"yes its true..."

after all...

even the ruler of hell

gets her punishment... 

  

 

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On June 15th 2008 xxpunkchik89xx Said :
xxpunkchik89xx wow!! i like it
On June 1st 2008 mangoguitar Said :
mangoguitar wow...lol pretty good, i like the very last lines
On May 31st 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet this is long but its amazing for an 11 year old
On May 31st 2008 dragonsoul0 Said :
dragonsoul0 Dark yet beautiful.
On May 31st 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 i loved it very creative
On May 30th 2008 Mogami Said :
Mogami You might have pulled this one out of your mind too fast... the twist and turns are gradual... yet I can see the image so clear! =P nice!