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those eyes |
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crushed |
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the damned |
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my day... |
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writers block |
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warning |
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no rain... |
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oppisites |
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what is it? |
the damned
when all law is gone and humanities ceased
the fairytale heaven is not over filled
it grows and grows and grows
till it seems no earth there ever was
heaven and hell have begun to swell
not even pergatory exists
the final judjement has been made
lets see how everyone in heaven is
shall we?
faces uknown faces unneeded
a few i know but so many
crowding around and walking by
so close i should trip
i turn around
pretty much th...HEY LOOK OUT!
a head on collision my eyes shut to calm me
no falling no ground
huh? my eyes open i turn again
he walked right through me
no one knows im here
they dont see me
im not here at all
my silkin robe stiffens
my halo melts and
my wings burn away
like they were in...
oh no
i raise my gaze
i see people crying
there tears are different
clear tears leave bloody trails
the blood never dries
an eternal scar is burned
the faces of many are deformed
i move about and notice something
people here see me but there expressions
fear and hatred in the after life too
but no one here insults me
the labor they are put through
uuuggggghhhhh
excruciating
i continue to roam about
i feel uncomfortable
yet for the first time
i feel like i belong
i see a door
i go through
HUH?
oh man
i see me and theres satan
but in the throne is me
and satan is kneeling
its not me
a fain of great power
took my image
in help to me
or to go against me
i dont really know
i listen and hear this
"this is your prize for such
a demented little soul"
thanks says the fain
"goodbye my liege"
when satans gone
a voice calls
"yes its true
you rule over the
underworld"
i dont believe this
thats not me
I tag the raptured
I tag the damned
I give the orders
I know this is true
i look the fake in the eyes
a sneer spreads across its face
winds blow and rocks fall
everything is silent
i challenge the fain
to a battle of souls
sure says the fain
the duel never begins
fains have no souls
therefor it lost
all the pain and torture
im so unfamiliar
i sit in the throne
thinking perhaps
i remember now
ive been here all along
i never left my throne
this is my doing
the door opens
and in comes satan
he kneels before me
"this is your prize for
such a demented little soul"
thanks i say
"goodbye my liege"
he leaves me in the throne room
i call out as if someones there
"yes its true..."
after all...
even the ruler of hell
gets her punishment...
| On June 15th 2008 xxpunkchik89xx Said : | |
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wow!! i like it |
| On June 1st 2008 mangoguitar Said : | |
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wow...lol pretty good, i like the very last lines |
| On May 31st 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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this is long but its amazing for an 11 year old |
| On May 31st 2008 dragonsoul0 Said : | |
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Dark yet beautiful. |
| On May 31st 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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i loved it very creative |
| On May 30th 2008 Mogami Said : | |
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You might have pulled this one out of your mind too fast... the twist and turns are gradual... yet I can see the image so clear! =P nice! |


