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Created:
09/12 2008
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Category:
Love
My Poems
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Sorrys and Goodbyes |
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15
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My Broken Home Is Held Together By Love |
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You Don't Know Me Anymore |
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Never, Never Let You Go |
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No Longer Yours |
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Loser Rules the City |
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Silence |
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You MAKE, BREAK, and TAKE |
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The Storm in my Heart |
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Heartstrung |
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5
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If You Can Live On Love,Tell Me |
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Crying Angel |
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Regret |
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Shattered Times |
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Twilight |
Summer Vows Prt. 2
I vow to be his everything, his life
His passion, his smile and mostly his wife
For it was our destiny to spend eternity together
And how great it feels to be his forever...
Strongly intertwined and locked, lost in love
Past, present, future our souls will be one
And I want his presence to be the last I feel
For without him I'd be so numb from the lonely chill
Because I'm only half of a being without he
His hopes and dreams make up a part of me
So his future is my future and this future will be
Beautiful because undying love is all we see
And without him here, things would be crucial for me
Because he is my air and I would never again breathe
If he walked away, so we'll walk hand in hand for eternity.
Please Login to post comments| On January 18th 2009 vernathome Said: |
| Positively amazing, Kudos to you both, It is a truly beautiful poem, Keep writing. |
| On January 14th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: |
| o.o No. xD |
| On November 30th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
| she's right you know, we should write more together. in my opinion our collabo is one of the best. |
| On September 13th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| I love this you two should write more together! |
| On September 12th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said: |
| hey..k first off..honestly..i think this shouldve been one post..but i get u on it wouldnt be fair to whoever wouldnt have posted it..overall i liked it...esp the love/blood line..i dunno it stood out to me...i was kinda feelin the first half a little bit more than the second(like first paragraph or w/e the propper term is)but overall i liked it...nice playing off each other's lines and evrything..which makes it harder then if u were to just do it urself so madd proppz on that..feel its something everybody can relate to..well almost everybody..and i liked it(same comment as what was posted on deadpoets) |
| On September 12th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
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| for people who didnt read the first part, here it is! Part One i'm in bold, chayeah is regular.
we did damn good, Rose. thanks for doing this with me =) |
