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For a rocking guy!

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Created: 07/17 2008
Views: 225
Category: Love

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Nastay

My heart is broken

My writing has ceased to be spoken

He stole my life, my soul

He left behind an oblivion of black holes

No one can understand my lack of feelings

My numbness that you have slowly been healing

You tell me I can’t do this

You are trying to invoke a lost bliss

No words can explain

This horrible gut wrenching pain

My star has fallen from the sky

A sun has risen from that black night

Rain pours down on my pitiful sad felt parade

But slowly this darkness will fade

I’m glad you were trying

Thanks for listening to the depressing sighing

I embrace this feeling in a million huggle ways

My eyes with your guide start to see better days

Now I am a person again

Thanks for being my friend

 

 

 

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On July 17th 2008 UnSane420 Said: 
UnSane420 this is awesome i love it
On July 17th 2008 motomel200 Said: 
my picture
thts heaps good
On July 17th 2008 justjetjustis Said: 
justjetjustis sweet
On July 17th 2008 blah2blah Said: 
blah2blah the line 'my eyes with your guide start to see better days' really stood out to me, i have a friend like that-there arent very many ppl who can do that for you. i enjoyed reading this!
On July 17th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 awwwww. this flowed nicely and i just loved it. as i can tell doug did as well =]
On July 17th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 wowzers.... thanks....and ur welcome.. it is what friends do. *Huggles to u too*