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I was feeling a little dark.Rate this Poem
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My Poems
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16
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Sorrys and Goodbyes |
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15
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My Broken Home Is Held Together By Love |
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13
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You Don't Know Me Anymore |
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11
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Never, Never Let You Go |
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12
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No Longer Yours |
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11
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Loser Rules the City |
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13
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Silence |
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11
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You MAKE, BREAK, and TAKE |
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6
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The Storm in my Heart |
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7
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Heartstrung |
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5
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If You Can Live On Love,Tell Me |
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7
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Crying Angel |
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5
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Regret |
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4
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Shattered Times |
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17
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Twilight |
God of the Dammed
Imperfection
Death without a resurrection
Life without a north star
You look for him but he is way too far
Happiness comes in the oddest places
But the only emotion you see if a scowl on their faces
Tonight is the night of the unwanted
Today is the day of the haunted
The truth hurts your ears
Blood washes your fears
Dark shadows feel like home
And the pitiless are left to roam
Crushing waves take over your mind
Nothingness turns to mass over time
Growing older as your body falls apart
Watching the young people ruin their hearts
Blackness fades into something darker
Try as you may you can’t fight the current of the water
Closer to the end of the tunnel on to find it goes on
Hit in the back of the head, your last breath a groan
Oh, let the thunder roar
Let is shake you to the core
Let my wrath be upon you
Forget everything you once knew
Time to sleep
And let the reaper reap
Please Login to post comments| On September 1st 2008 XrenaissanceX9 Said: |
| That's bs Peter I have the original copy where I wrote (in pen.. dated) this with the 1st version of how it was written. I never post the exact thing that I start with. Fuck you. |
| On August 8th 2008 peterserpent Said: |
| announce a new winner. |
| On August 8th 2008 peterserpent Said: |
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| this is plagiarized from www.poetryamerica.com/users/charnalambdon |
| On July 17th 2008 RalRasper Said: |
| yeah this is kinda similar to mine in a way but all together different, we use some of the same words. Nice poem though |
| On July 15th 2008 browneyes33 Said: |
| THIS IS REALLY AMAZING!!!! You can feel the anger while reading. |
| On July 14th 2008 kissofasia Said: |
| Wow,this just blows me away....Really,how could someone like you that is so young can actually write something sooooo powerful...Amazing job.... |
| On July 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| Wow this is really really good! Keep up the good work! :) |
| On July 13th 2008 lakeguy2302 Said: |
| Wow Rose, your talents never cease to amaze me. Knowing you as well as I do I now understand why you write such dark imagery. Hopefully I can make some of that darkness turn to light. |
| On July 13th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| i read this several times just to make sure i absorbed it all. i like this. i reallly like this... let the reaper reap. the symbolism and metaphors. nice. |
| On July 13th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
| This was great. So beautiful. Love it. |
| On July 13th 2008 chayeah22 Said: |
| TYPO="only to find it goes on" |
| On July 13th 2008 deadpoet Said: |
| Ugh, I'm mad at you. you posted this beautiful piece of art that gave me inspiration yet now, I have to go. So I cant write another poem *sigh* |
