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An IM that I turned into a poem.

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Created: 06/21 2008
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Category: Passion

My Poems

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Heartstrung
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Regret
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Shattered Times
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Twilight

Hidden Perfection

I know I will cry when I meet you

I won't be able to hold it back

But you are unique and not afraid to be you

It’s rare do you realize that?

Do you know how many people don’t possess it?

They just become one of the masses

And disappear

You wouldn’t disappear because your mind is one of the fastest

People around you

Always put you down

I want you to realize that what they think and say is meaningless

And the rest of the world will love your every sound

My beautiful love

With the big brown eyes

So delicate and intelligent

But you never seem to get over the lies

Where we are; annexes to hell

You’re my fallen angel

And I worship the place where you fell

My love is all I can give

My heart is yours to take

Do with it as you wish

Even if your wish is to make it break

Whisper your secrets

Into my ear

Whisper those sweet something’s

That I hold so dear

To be honest

I don't know what you really see in me

I'm nothing special

Not rich, famous

Or successful

All I know is that

You are perfect to me in every way

And I want to wake up to that perfection

Every single day

 

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On June 24th 2008 kissofasia Said: 
my picture
awww,it's so beautiful.I could feel it.Very much lovely too........
On June 21st 2008 angelalone Said: 
angelalone i love it.this is beautiful :-)
On June 21st 2008 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet this is beautifullllllll, Im mad at muse for saying what I wanted to say. GAWSH not only do our boyfriends have to be just alike, she has to think like me too...UGH! LOL. I was gonna say those were my favorite lines...but she already said it
On June 21st 2008 lakeguy2302 Said: 
lakeguy2302 Thank you baby. I can't believe that you can take my simple words and turn them into something so beautiful.
On June 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem "You’re my fallen angel And I worship the place where you fell." "My heart is yours to take Do with it as you wish Even if your wish is to make it break." I love those lines the best. It started off sorta slow but it turned out good! Keep writing! :)
On June 21st 2008 chayeah22 Said: 
chayeah22 My boyfriend was trying to tell me how much he loved me and I could see through it and knew he was creating something beautiful, though he did not know it. He's so poetic with his word choices and he's clueless to it I think.