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This a true story about my ex-fianceeRate this Poem
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My Poems
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Sorrys and Goodbyes |
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15
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My Broken Home Is Held Together By Love |
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13
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You Don't Know Me Anymore |
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11
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Never, Never Let You Go |
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12
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No Longer Yours |
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11
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Loser Rules the City |
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13
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Silence |
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11
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You MAKE, BREAK, and TAKE |
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6
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The Storm in my Heart |
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7
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Heartstrung |
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5
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If You Can Live On Love,Tell Me |
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Crying Angel |
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5
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Regret |
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Shattered Times |
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Twilight |
Abandoned Ring
The rain has finally stopped
And the last tear has dropped
I’m trying to hold up my head
And clean up where I have bled
Our hearts together equaled emptiness
And you know I won’t be wearing that wedding dress
Because I left the ring by your feet at the floor
And I left before one last “you’re a whore”
I left you there with your bottles and cans
I left you there because you were hardly a man
I left because the scars still hurt
And I was tired of hiding bruises under long-sleeved shirts
I was tired of hearing “I love you” every time you wanted sex
And I was tired about wondering if your addiction would cause a wreck
And I knew it wouldn’t be long until I was dead inside
I knew it wouldn’t be long until I gave up and went for the ride
I said goodbye to you that day
And I hope you go to hell and enjoy your stay
My heart is now slowly healing
And I have a brand new feeling
The feeling is a love so true
And that is nothing I could ever get from you
| On June 3rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: |
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| That's sad. I love it. It hits me hardest maybe. Really great outpour. ~hugs~ |
| On May 31st 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
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| This is fanstatic!~Kudos~ Don't you dare go back to that man! He dosen't diserve you! |
| On May 31st 2008 lakeguy2302 Said: |
| On May 31st 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
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| this a good poem it really got me thinking how addiction ruins many lives and how people need to be strong like i said its a good poem keep up the work |
| On May 31st 2008 deadpoet Said: |
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| wow, this poem literally gave me chills. it was beautifully written and i could envision it in my head the whole time i was reading. |


