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This a true story about my ex-fiancee

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Created: 05/31 2008
Views: 121
Category: Other

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Abandoned Ring

The rain has finally stopped

And the last tear has dropped

I’m trying to hold up my head

And clean up where I have bled

 

Our hearts together equaled emptiness

And you know I won’t be wearing that wedding dress

Because I left the ring by your feet at the floor

And I left before one last “you’re a whore”

 

I left you there with your bottles and cans

I left you there because you were hardly a man

I left because the scars still hurt

And I was tired of hiding bruises under long-sleeved shirts

 

I was tired of hearing “I love you” every time you wanted sex

And I was tired about wondering if your addiction would cause a wreck

And I knew it wouldn’t be long until I was dead inside

I knew it wouldn’t be long until I gave up and went for the ride

 

I said goodbye to you that day

And I hope you go to hell and enjoy your stay

 

My heart is now slowly healing

And I have a brand new feeling

The feeling is a love so true

And that is nothing I could ever get from you

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On June 3rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: 
sixtiesdoll That's sad. I love it. It hits me hardest maybe. Really great outpour. ~hugs~
On May 31st 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem This is fanstatic!~Kudos~ Don't you dare go back to that man! He dosen't diserve you!
On May 31st 2008 lakeguy2302 Said: 
lakeguy2302 If any of you knew the real stories behind this poem you would beshocked. This poem alone should have a thousand points for bravery to relive it and write it down, and a thousand more for having the guts to be strong enough to post it for the world to read.
On May 31st 2008 tiffany1058 Said: 
tiffany1058 this a good poem it really got me thinking how addiction ruins many lives and how people need to be strong like i said its a good poem keep up the work
On May 31st 2008 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet wow, this poem literally gave me chills. it was beautifully written and i could envision it in my head the whole time i was reading.