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Created: 05/11 2009
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Category: Love

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Puzzle pieces

A disfuctional heart that loves like no other, but no this is no ordinary heart in the middle of this heart lies a puzzle of a boy whose lost and confused. Meanwhile this heart belongs to a girl who gave her heat to that very boy. This girl has a scar from the burning heartbreak that this confused boy has caused. She's locked behind a prison made of tears. She's stripped of her pride and she felt buried alive.

 She was let down by her own emotions. she was supressed by unwanted memories, she wanted to earn back her dignity. on the other hand this boy is proud , mischievios and had miscellanious feelings. As the girl sat behind the prison of tears that she created, she beganed to put the puzzle together. What ahe saw made tears run out of her eyes like an accesive rain shower.

Each piece created  more understanding of what she was feeling. Not only was she hurt but he was also. The puzzle piece fit together like breath o life. Puzzle pieces gathered around a shattered girl. Once the puzzle was complete the girl realized that not only was the puzzle a picture of him, but half was of herself also. She open her eyes and saw the things that lyed beneath the unwanted memories.

The boy was her perfect match she just had to go through all of the madness to figure it out. The tears formed into a puddle as she stood up. Her dignity was returning quickly as she took the first step of change. As she stepped futher away from the puddle  she saw the boy stepping towards her.

Little did she know he was going through the same thing as she. He felt the same way, it was hard to tell her how he felt and keep his pride, he wasn't used to it. They felt he inability to not tell each other how the felt burn away. They took another door that lead them to an umfamiliar place together. They left everything behind them and together they stood hand and hand.

The puzzle was finally complete. Each piece was connected by feelings of love. Puzzle pieces forms a picture and in this picture they were togeter to stay.The puzzle pieces also showed that years from now they would raise a family.

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