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Caterpillar Chronicles
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Created on 3-29-08
i’ve been living days of masquerade
half awake, but dead asleep
the memories refuse to fade
plunge into the waters deep
my lungs begin to beg for air
and the current carries me under
waves washing with stories there
they break me upon the shore with thunder
the skins i’ve shed cling to me still
these leaves refuse to fall
this mountain that once was a hill
i can hear the coasts as they call
so baptize me in the city
we’ll follow the lights down to the day
the beaten wings, they beg for pity
asking what lost soul does say.
i had heart to stop living on leaves
but in this chrysalis the change is slow
longing for what the butterfly believes
i fear that i will never know
half awake, but dead asleep
the memories refuse to fade
plunge into the waters deep
my lungs begin to beg for air
and the current carries me under
waves washing with stories there
they break me upon the shore with thunder
the skins i’ve shed cling to me still
these leaves refuse to fall
this mountain that once was a hill
i can hear the coasts as they call
so baptize me in the city
we’ll follow the lights down to the day
the beaten wings, they beg for pity
asking what lost soul does say.
i had heart to stop living on leaves
but in this chrysalis the change is slow
longing for what the butterfly believes
i fear that i will never know
Please Login to post comments| On July 24th 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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I really love this. Perfect rhyming, perfect topic~ Buutifull!! ^O^ |
| On July 5th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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I enjoyed this one, brava, the metaphors were striking! ~L |
| On March 29th 2008 chaotickitty12 Said : | |
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category* |
| On March 29th 2008 chaotickitty12 Said : | |
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oops, forgot to change the catergory. o.o |
