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Everyone's a critic
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Created on 3-29-08
you ache and burn to shoot us down.
failure makes the sweetest sound.
you try to act like you’re being modest
and you pretend that your opinions are the broadest
you have no reason but claim to be proficient
if you tried what i do, it’d be nothing close to vibrant
you think you know if my words have value
all you’re really looking to do is argue.
you degrade my passion with analysis
and you try to apply some sort of thesis
but you don’t know anything about beauty
your evaluation is nothing less than snooty
who are you to decide what is or is not art?
there is no one left for you to out-smart.
we don’t care if you like our Truth In Morass.
stick that droll judgement up your crowded ass.
failure makes the sweetest sound.
you try to act like you’re being modest
and you pretend that your opinions are the broadest
you have no reason but claim to be proficient
if you tried what i do, it’d be nothing close to vibrant
you think you know if my words have value
all you’re really looking to do is argue.
you degrade my passion with analysis
and you try to apply some sort of thesis
but you don’t know anything about beauty
your evaluation is nothing less than snooty
who are you to decide what is or is not art?
there is no one left for you to out-smart.
we don’t care if you like our Truth In Morass.
stick that droll judgement up your crowded ass.
Please Login to post comments| On July 7th 2008 donkaii Said : | |
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Lmao i love the last line!! wow i love it, it kinda reminds me of one i wrote, its called No One Can Judge Me, but your ones better, has much more feeling etc. This is really great!! |
