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Dreamweaver

Views (443) Passion Created on 7-4-06 Flag

I wish I knew of a place

Where beauty didnt matter

Where the biggest cake in the world

Could never make you fatter.

 

A place I could live my dreams

And I could swing and hit the moon

Where the sun will never burn

And where the end is never soon

 

Where the broccoli tastes like candy

And history is never sad

Where brown is in the rainbow

When all the good replace the bad

 

Where the grass would never stain

No matter how many times Id fall

Where the kisses healed the cuts

Cause then Id heal them all

 

Maybe its in Idaho,

A place weve never heard

Or maybe its on Mars

But maybe thats absurd.

 

Maybe Im just dreaming

But punish me for this sleep

For a girl who truly believes

That in my heart, is this world I keep.

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On March 8th 2008 PRiiSCiiLLA Said :
PRiiSCiiLLA Wow this is really really good!
On November 18th 2007 cmccray Said :
cmccray I love this one!
On July 16th 2007 KaylaLaLa0705 Said :
KaylaLaLa0705 You write with such eloquence! I love this poem!
On June 12th 2007 thee1phantom Said :
thee1phantom you are unbelievably talented. i hope you can cultivate your talent and express it to the fullest.
On February 23rd 2007 Droconian Said :
Droconian i really like this one. captures the view of a dreamer.
On January 28th 2007 Takerslove Said :
Takerslove I love your poems
On November 26th 2006 maryjoseph Said :
maryjoseph very good very very good and how true....well what we would like to be true anyways. Well written!
On November 21st 2006 jo144 Said :
jo144 This is beautifully written. It's got some really nice ideas in it. you're very talented.
On November 21st 2006 MizzModel69 Said :
MizzModel69 Oh.. I loved this so much..
On August 20th 2006 Ranna47 Said :
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Encore, mate. Very cool.