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Dreamweaver
I wish I knew of a place
Where beauty didnt matter
Where the biggest cake in the world
Could never make you fatter.
A place I could live my dreams
And I could swing and hit the moon
Where the sun will never burn
And where the end is never soon
Where the broccoli tastes like candy
And history is never sad
Where brown is in the rainbow
When all the good replace the bad
Where the grass would never stain
No matter how many times Id fall
Where the kisses healed the cuts
Cause then Id heal them all
Maybe its in Idaho,
A place weve never heard
Or maybe its on Mars
But maybe thats absurd.
Maybe Im just dreaming
But punish me for this sleep
For a girl who truly believes
That in my heart, is this world I keep.
| On March 8th 2008 PRiiSCiiLLA Said : | |
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Wow this is really really good! |
| On November 18th 2007 cmccray Said : | |
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I love this one! |
| On July 16th 2007 KaylaLaLa0705 Said : | |
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You write with such eloquence! I love this poem! |
| On June 12th 2007 thee1phantom Said : | |
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you are unbelievably talented. i hope you can cultivate your talent and express it to the fullest. |
| On February 23rd 2007 Droconian Said : | |
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i really like this one. captures the view of a dreamer. |
| On January 28th 2007 Takerslove Said : | |
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I love your poems |
| On November 26th 2006 maryjoseph Said : | |
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very good very very good and how true....well what we would like to be true anyways. Well written! |
| On November 21st 2006 jo144 Said : | |
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This is beautifully written. It's got some really nice ideas in it. you're very talented. |
| On November 21st 2006 MizzModel69 Said : | |
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Oh.. I loved this so much.. |
| On August 20th 2006 Ranna47 Said : | |
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Encore, mate. Very cool. |


