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Sunset

Views (112) Haiku Created on 7-8-07 Flag

Spy dusk in silence.
Breathless, paletted, waiting night
Clandestine shadow

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On August 29th 2007 Qurmudjin Said :
Qurmudjin 3 amazing phrases. Powerful word choices. "Breathless, paletted, waiting night" is high poetry, for sure...
On July 23rd 2007 robespierre96 Said :
robespierre96 i can see the colours now.palletted(awesomely descriptive)great visualization.
On July 12th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang that is indeed a fun word to say,,, ^o^... the descriptions are wonderful,,, pictured an image of sunsetting in my mind's eye,, very good,,, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On July 10th 2007 cbewing Said :
cbewing Clandestine..lol I love that word!
On July 9th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane very alluring..I like it