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Take My Hand
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Created on 9-20-06
Take my hand
You well may fall
Please take my hand
And heed my call
Take my hand
That I may lift you up
I'll hold you high
And fill your cup
My friend, my love
I need you so
You need me too
More than you know
You are in pain
I know this much
So take my hand
I'll lift you up
You well may fall
Please take my hand
And heed my call
Take my hand
That I may lift you up
I'll hold you high
And fill your cup
My friend, my love
I need you so
You need me too
More than you know
You are in pain
I know this much
So take my hand
I'll lift you up
Please Login to post comments| On January 24th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Sweet |
| On November 30th 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I don't really know what to say, but it was good, I liked it |
| On November 30th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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short and effective...sounds like great friendship to me. |
| On August 7th 2007 happyare Said : | |
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Great! While friendships formed like that rock, it's not so great when that's the basis of a life partnership because then the dominant one in the relationship is left unsatisfied. |
| On June 28th 2007 hellshelper Said : | |
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nice |
| On June 6th 2007 cjaskot Said : | |
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very nice =) |
| On April 24th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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I like this poem...nice |
| On April 6th 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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wow. skill. |
