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Created on 5-5-07
When your world is dark and gray
the little thing help make my day
because up ahead what do I see?
Something bad is out to get me
Can I escape? Can I get out?
It makes me want to scream and shout!
All this work I drive ahead
When the future may see me dead
Lying alone in the night
I think about my horrible plight
Should I go and end my life?
Is that the answer to all the strife?
But then I saw your pretty face
all my problems were erased
now I know what I will do
I will fall in love with you!
this is for danielle, the girl of my dreams. i love you hun!
Please Login to post comments| On May 21st 2007 NeutralR1 Said : | |
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that is wonderful. she should be very happy with it. |
| On May 9th 2007 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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you are really good at poetry. i envy you. lol |
| On May 8th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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Amazingly nice. |
| On May 7th 2007 Chelle57 Said : | |
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Awwww you wrote it for Danielle?? That's awesomely sweeet!!! ^_^ haha |
| On May 7th 2007 dark013angel Said : | |
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awww...that's so sweet, i love it |
| On May 7th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Awwww sweet. |
