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in my dying days

Views (344) Tragedy Created on 2-21-07 Flag

will you comfort me in my dying hour?

will you hold my hand in my darkest day?

will you come and sit near in my final moments?

will you hold me dear in my final throes?

will you sit at my side in my time of need?

my last wish will you abide at the end of my life?

will you love me on my deathbed? 

 

i wrote this for a girl that doesn't even know i exist and could care less wether or not i died. ironic isn't it? 

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On May 21st 2007 NeutralR1 Said :
NeutralR1 Very Ironic. You Should Let her know you exist. She may Know without you knowing.
On May 10th 2007 AnimalLover411 Said :
AnimalLover411 That is so sad,get over it,if she dosen't know you exist tell her who you are and then she will know,but the poem is very nice and sad
On May 7th 2007 dark013angel Said :
dark013angel awww....that's touching...but sad
On May 7th 2007 casamar Said :
casamar awwweee thats touching
On May 7th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Awww. I like it.
On May 2nd 2007 iXAllyOopsXi Said :
iXAllyOopsXi if she could care less then she shouldnt be worth ur words .. u wait for the grl who makes u feel great just bc she cares about u soo much then write a poem! PS i do really like the poem♥
On April 20th 2007 0GuitarGirl0 Said :
0GuitarGirl0 Hmm... I can answer that. ^.^ I would. And you can bet on that. Love you Casey!!
On April 14th 2007 0GuitarGirl0 Said :
0GuitarGirl0 That was beautiful... ^_^
On March 6th 2007 Bethiny Said :
Bethiny Of corse I will.... Lol... it realy broke my heart after I read it..
On March 1st 2007 500nets Said :
500nets it reminds me of paul mcartneys lyrics "will you still need me will you still feed me when i'm 64"
On February 26th 2007 Jizzlenator Said :
Jizzlenator really sad and ironic...but good!
On February 25th 2007 jvbabe1234 Said :
jvbabe1234 that was a really good one. and ironic.lol
On February 21st 2007 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet that was very touching
On February 21st 2007 ashleyswebb Said :
ashleyswebb aww that is sweet..