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I've got a starburst
I've got a starburst how about you?
i've got a starburst woopee and woohoo
i'm tired of all poetry containing death
this poem has a little less depth
it's about a lighter side of life
A place i know without any strife
you just grab a couple starburst
and let the world do it's worst
pop on in and close your eyes
prepare yourself for a big surprise
if life is trying to bring you down
just hitch a ride to starburst town!
you can tell i've had a few too many starburst :)
| On June 4th 2008 brokenvampire1 Said : | |
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it takes alots of talent to write a poem not containg pain.wonderful |
| On October 14th 2007 animechick27 Said : | |
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Yay!!! Finally, someon gets the whole "Poems-shouln't-be-so-dark" concept!!! two thumbs up ^-^ |
| On August 9th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said : | |
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haha...original! |
| On July 26th 2007 MourningZephyr Said : | |
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good poem. I hate Emo poems. |
| On July 18th 2007 xxsarah18xx Said : | |
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ahh starburst my fave * lol* pink one heh*
ilove this poem a lOOOTTT! HEhe |
| On May 21st 2007 NeutralR1 Said : | |
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For a poem about Candy, This is really good.. |
| On May 10th 2007 AnimalLover411 Said : | |
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STARBURST=HYPER=YAY=GOOD POEM |
| On May 9th 2007 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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lol this is m-azing |
| On May 8th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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STARBURSTS ROCK! lol |
| On May 7th 2007 dark013angel Said : | |
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haha, i like it...good job |
| On May 7th 2007 dark013angel Said : | |
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haha, i like it...good job |
| On May 2nd 2007 iXAllyOopsXi Said : | |
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Starburst Advertisment.. Love it! |
| On April 14th 2007 0GuitarGirl0 Said : | |
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Well, random, cute, uplifting after your others... I get a hint of hyperness... lol... |
| On April 4th 2007 nascott01 Said : | |
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haha very random, but it made me laugh :) |
| On March 20th 2007 sqgirl1010 Said : | |
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haha thats a cute one!! |
| On March 6th 2007 Bethiny Said : | |
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Cute! It's awesome! |
| On March 1st 2007 mrspina Said : | |
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L.O.L!!! i LOVE this one! its super CUTE! |
| On February 27th 2007 suicidalslug Said : | |
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Not sure how I feel about this. Very random...ok, I like it. |
| On February 27th 2007 imbored9909 Said : | |
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starburst is awesome |
| On February 25th 2007 jvbabe1234 Said : | |
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lol thats funny. i love starburst. |
| On February 25th 2007 ThatOneGirl061 Said : | |
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haha i have a funny story about starburst and when i read this it reminded me of it and put me ina good mood. hehe. |
| On February 21st 2007 ashleyswebb Said : | |
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random...yet awesome |
| On February 19th 2007 rellcinko Said : | |
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wow |
| On February 19th 2007 Jizzlenator Said : | |
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It reminds me of my poems |
| On February 19th 2007 Gigglez200969 Said : | |
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wow lol i love this!like its so awesomw i mean really im also tired of all the death ones and stuff this one really livend me up! |


