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lights outside my window

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lights flash by my window     

they're all i see

my eyes turned blind by life

view  the scene out there with disinterest

out towards the world

the grey dawn means nothing to me

nor the yellow sunrise

lights outside my window

they're all i see 

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On May 21st 2007 NeutralR1 Said :
NeutralR1 Thats good stuff man. I spent 3 days on a train, I saw where you mentioned that you wrote this while on a bus to mexico. I kno exactly how you felt sitting there watching the lights wizz by.
On May 19th 2007 drowningnlove Said :
drowningnlove really cool poem
On May 10th 2007 AnimalLover411 Said :
AnimalLover411 Thats cool
On May 8th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 NICE!
On April 20th 2007 0GuitarGirl0 Said :
0GuitarGirl0 Beautiful...
On March 5th 2007 Bethiny Said :
Bethiny Cool!
On March 1st 2007 mrspina Said :
mrspina i like it! it cool ^.^
On February 27th 2007 Jizzlenator Said :
Jizzlenator great imagery!
On February 25th 2007 jvbabe1234 Said :
jvbabe1234 its a really good one.
On February 19th 2007 oralgymnast87 Said :
oralgymnast87 very nice..amazing imagery.
On February 19th 2007 Gigglez200969 Said :
Gigglez200969 that is really good!
On February 18th 2007 casey0827 Said :
casey0827 thnx i was riding in the bus for twelve hours going to mexico and i wrote this cuz i didn't see out the window anymore it flashed in front of me, blurring my vision.
On February 18th 2007 ikickurass89 Said :
ikickurass89 wow, short but damn, i like that, that rocked.
On February 18th 2007 ikickurass89 Said :
ikickurass89 wow, short but damn, i like that, that rocked.