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this is kinda a sad poem

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In the end

Views (315) Tragedy Created on 1-24-07 Flag

In the end when theres no more hope and you struggle to stand up and struggle to open you eyes. In the end when you believe it's time to let go adn u strugle to sit up in the hopital bed adn people tell you to hang on one more year one more month one more week one more day one more hour or one more minute, hang on as long as you can, but as soon as you feel that light that pulls u in, let it pull you in the rest of the way and go to ur god, because it's ur time its the end.

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On August 28th 2007 Ericnessxo Said :
Ericnessxo Good =) i like what it points out.
On May 8th 2007 DrizzleHere Said :
DrizzleHere this really good, you have a good choice of words here, very beautiful
On May 7th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Beautiful
On May 2nd 2007 suicidalslug Said :
suicidalslug Very good poem. A few mispellings and im not a fan of abbreviations either. But a good poem none-the-less.
On April 7th 2007 Chris181 Said :
Chris181 That's amazing!!! :)
On April 6th 2007 casamar Said :
casamar thanks
On April 5th 2007 calebp5 Said :
calebp5 i like it in the end there is always a way out