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"I tamed my frizzy blonde curls..."Rate this Poem
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Him |
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Notice Me! |
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Things I've wanted to say |
Notice Me!
I wore my prettiest blouse and my best jeans.
I didn't wear tennis shoes this time .
I tamed my mass of frizzy blonde curls so they lay smoothly down my back.
I tied a red ribbon through my hair, hoping it will catch you eye.
My make up was perfect, and I sat there fiddling with my necklace waiting for you to come in the room.
There you are standing right in front of me, you walk to your desk and I hope you'll turn around and say something to me, smile, nod or even look at me.
But you do none of these and you walk away again.
I check my appearance again to make sure everything is perfect and wait for you again.
Your friend comes in and says "You look nice today"
I blush and say thanks.
He noticed me, why can't you?
What do I have to do to grab your attention?
You come back into the room.
I pretend to laugh at my friends comment and I flip my hair,
But still you don't look over.
Why do you hurt me like that?
Why can't you see me?
WHY CAN'T YOU JUST NOTICE ME?!
| On December 17th 2007 thatbluewoman Said : | |
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ugh gosh i HATE it when this happens!! great poem!! it reminds me the song i wrote "unrequited love hurts" (come see if you wantto ;]) |
| On November 5th 2007 kelkel234 Said : | |
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O wow I kno that feeling. When no guy will ever look @ u it ticks me off. Welp u seem pretty good @ this...better then me lol. |


