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"I tamed my frizzy blonde curls..."

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Notice Me!

Views (89) Love Created on 5-19-07 Flag

I wore my prettiest blouse and my best jeans.

I didn't wear tennis shoes this time .

I tamed my mass of frizzy blonde curls so they lay smoothly down my back.

I tied a red ribbon through my hair, hoping it will catch you eye.

My make up was perfect, and I sat there fiddling with my necklace waiting for you to come in the room.

There you are standing right in front of me, you walk to your desk and I hope you'll turn around and say something to me, smile, nod or even look at me.

But you do none of these and you walk away again.

I check my appearance again to make sure everything is perfect and wait for you again.

Your friend comes in and says "You look nice today"

I blush and say thanks.

He noticed me, why can't you?

What do I have to do to grab your attention?

You come back into the room.

I pretend to laugh at my friends comment and I flip my hair,

But still you don't look over.

Why do you hurt me like that?

Why can't you see me?

WHY CAN'T YOU JUST NOTICE ME?!

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On December 17th 2007 thatbluewoman Said :
thatbluewoman ugh gosh i HATE it when this happens!! great poem!! it reminds me the song i wrote "unrequited love hurts" (come see if you wantto ;])
On November 5th 2007 kelkel234 Said :
kelkel234 O wow I kno that feeling. When no guy will ever look @ u it ticks me off. Welp u seem pretty good @ this...better then me lol.