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My guiding light |
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All lifes questions |
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my faith in men |
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a growing bitternes |
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strength |
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The ones that came before |
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those lost... those found |
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Everytime We Say Good-bye |
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Somethings Missing |
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All The While |
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You promised...you lied |
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My only one |
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my life |
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You promised...you lied
you said it all would be ok
just for now not forever,
until i graduate you said
but how i wish youd stay
because when i think of you,
i cant help but cry
my friends say get over it,
but oh how i need you.
i need you like i need air,
like a flower needs the rain
this choise youve made is for the best
but it just doesnt seem fair.
since you said those fateful words
i havent sincerely smiled
ive cried a dozen times or more
ive shed a million tears.
my best friend held me as i cried
and said id be alright
but while his arm was around me
i was wishing it was yours
i cant believe youre really gone,
that youre not mine anymore
but until things come back into place
ill be waiting at my door.
| On April 5th 2008 corbin92295 Said : | |
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tht was great...i feel your pain |
| On September 10th 2007 danielftlew Said : | |
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Hope things get better. |
| On September 9th 2007 ellies15 Said : | |
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:'( |
| On September 9th 2007 chicawhatwhatb Said : | |
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deeply felt, nicely written, definitly relatable, I like it. Mind lookin at some of my stuff? |


