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Kiss of Death

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As i sit in a park,

on a cold winters nite.

I await for my love,

to come into site.

The cold wind blew,

on my chest and face.

And the snow began to fall,

Very smoothly into place.

I saw a cars light,

coming faster towards me.

I got unto my feet,

a stood by a tree.

The car door opend,

and a foot stooped out.

A body came into view,

and began to walk out.

It was my love whos hand,

stretched out towards me.

I thought to myself,

"should i flee with thee?"

He gave me a hug

that was o so tight,

And let me know

well make love all nite.

I got into the car,

and he bit on  my ear.

As he reached for my neck i knew,

there was nothing to fear.

He reached for my shirt,

and i aimed for his pants.

I unbuckled his belt,

and he gave me a glance.

When I reached  my home,

The car made a stop,

And my love picked me up by my waist,

so that I wouldnt drop.

He carried me to my room,

my room o warm,

And threw me on the bed,

stronger than the outsides storm.

He jumped on me and

tousled with my hair,

And i thought to my self

"Is  this fair?"

I took of his shirt,

and jumped on his back.

But made sure that,

He couldnt do it back.

He put me in the air,

and threw me on the wall,

And i thought to myself,

" Im gonna have a ball!"

He took of my shirt and pants

and all that was in between,

until we were both naked.

ready to make a scene.

As he enterd my body,

first slowly than fast.

I really hoped this moment,

could surely last.

As i tried to regain,

the feeling in my feet.

A soon realized,

we were moving to a beat.

He picked me up high,

and pressed me on the wall.

And he did my up and down,

until i made a call.

A call so loud,

that the gods could hear.

Of the intense passion,

any human would want near.

As he continued to pulsate,

inside my tender being.

I thought to myself,

" Is this truely what I'm seeing?"

I couldnt hold it in any more,

this dangerous feeling inside.

I felt if i didnt scream and bite,

I would surely die.

He picked me up for the last time,

and gently put me on my bed.

He caressed me from the side of my waist,

until he reached my head.

He told me a secret,

I would never forget.

He told me the dangers,

if our lips should get wet.

I thought i knew what he meant,

considering I'm a freak.

I checked to see if some how,

his head sprung a leak.

He told me we could make love,

but never must we kiss.

If this should happen,

I would surely be missed.

As he slowy exited out,

of my insides so sore.

He explaind the story so sad,

that hurt my heart to the core.

He was under a spell called,

" The Kiss of Death."

That not even out lips could touch,

one anothers breath.

I told him in calm words,

so dear from my soul

" This entire time I was with you,

that was my goal."

He knows I didnt care to die,

with a kiss from my love.

For I was under protection,

from someone up above.

He slowly reached my face,

putting his lips in place.

Knowing full well,

he will have no discrace.

He pressed his lips against mine,

so warm and tender.

Soon I realized the snow,

began to surrender.

It got really hot,

as if it turned to July,

I placed my hands on his chest and knew,

I wasnt meant to die.

You see the point of the spell was,

to kill those who dont respect.

The value of a lovers kiss,

and the passion in his sex.

I was strickly choosen,

to break the curse.

And the Kiss of Death,

had no remorse.

If you find true love,

I will let you know.

If you arnt faitful,

One kiss will let you know

 

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On August 26th 2008 lovedaisy Said :
lovedaisy i love hw u emphasise tht kisses shouldn't really be taken for granted they should mean something
On May 15th 2008 idunhadenuf Said :
idunhadenuf MyHotComments.com
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and ppldont get it that they can not take it for granted...
On May 15th 2008 xoxrinbabesxox Said :
xoxrinbabesxox thats amazing and beautiful especially the end
On May 14th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 pretty good actually love the detail
On May 14th 2008 holliefacexoxo Said :
holliefacexoxo love it!
On May 14th 2008 karmasakilla Said :
karmasakilla it is so nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe u did that. keep on writing
On May 12th 2008 burlesque13 Said :
burlesque13 i made this poem on the spot. hope u enjoy it cause i did