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The Promise |
The Promise
The world is cold and cruel,
Full of scorn and ridicule -
But I will be here for you.
When you have a bad day,
Things just won't go away,
I will lighten your dismay.
When dark storm clouds gather,
Bringing trouble and slander,
Have my shoulder if you rather.
When things are looking bleak,
You feel you are growing weak,
I will bring you what you seek.
Yes, the world is cold and cruel,
Though I may be playing the fool,
I will always be here for you.
| On June 25th 2007 Qurmudjin Said : | |
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Very sweet. Good, straightforward language and a cool rhyming scheme (AAA, BBB, CCC, etc). |
| On June 22nd 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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love it-shows how strong love can make a person |
| On June 21st 2007 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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Very beautiful! someone is very lucky to have you.
~Vampyr~ |
| On June 21st 2007 101091 Said : | |
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wow i love it. thats so perfectly said... i wish there were more people like this out in the world |
| On June 21st 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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good poem |
| On June 21st 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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awww i love this, so cute, i think everyone needs sumone like u |


