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The Promise

Views (108) Love Created on 6-21-07 Flag

The world is cold and cruel,

Full of scorn and ridicule -

But I will be here for you.

 

When you have a bad day,

Things just won't go away,

I will lighten your dismay.

 

When dark storm clouds gather,

Bringing trouble and slander,

Have my shoulder if you rather.

 

When things are looking bleak,

You feel you are growing weak,

I will bring you what you seek.

 

Yes, the world is cold and cruel,

Though I may be playing the fool,

I will always be here for you.

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On June 25th 2007 Qurmudjin Said :
Qurmudjin Very sweet. Good, straightforward language and a cool rhyming scheme (AAA, BBB, CCC, etc).
On June 22nd 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane love it-shows how strong love can make a person
On June 21st 2007 monkeydee22 Said :
monkeydee22 Very beautiful! someone is very lucky to have you. ~Vampyr~
On June 21st 2007 101091 Said :
101091 wow i love it. thats so perfectly said... i wish there were more people like this out in the world
On June 21st 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx good poem
On June 21st 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx awww i love this, so cute, i think everyone needs sumone like u