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Created on 4-27-07
Surrounded by darkness,
Consumed by anger and hate,
Drowning in a sea of despair,
Delivered into a living hell,
Hungering for bitter-sweet revenge,
Lost in my pain again,
Consumed by anger and hate,
Drowning in a sea of despair,
Delivered into a living hell,
Hungering for bitter-sweet revenge,
Lost in my pain again,
From the depths of my heart
This murky sickness grows...
From within the maze of my mind
This sinister evil is taking control...
Is it happen of circumstance?
Is it some twist of fate?
Or is it fault of my own;
To wind up in this state?
~Jenny W. 2005
Please Login to post comments| On June 15th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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the expression of anger pours out of this-great job! |
| On June 15th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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Vampire is right, don't let anger take control, and the ending hints at that but not very well... |
| On May 30th 2007 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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I like this a lot. but don't let anger take control. You should read my poem... called "Animal" it's just something i felt one day...
~Vampire~ |
| On May 17th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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wow... you have a great way with words. i love it. its very deep and there is power and emotion behind the words. |
| On April 27th 2007 Jaden1010 Said : | |
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very beautiful |
