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How love can change someone
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Created on 11-14-06
She just wants to be loved
But no one is there
her heart is stabbed with pain
Her soul is full with fear
SHe just wants to be happy
so her wrists wont bleed
she's tired of faking a smile
And crying herself to sleep
Someday she'll find that special one
and she'll live what she thought was a dream
the cuts on wrists will turn to scars
she will cry her final tear
her heart is finally happy
& her soul is no longer filled with fear
Please Login to post comments| On January 17th 2007 sincerelyichab Said : | |
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back off mate, it's poetry, you write what's on your mind as a release, and if you mean it, then it's good, it's a big problem for people, and using it as an example is showing that you do mean what you're writing. I like it, you describe it fairly well in a short amount of space, and it's sad to know that some girls/guys beg for that release so much...but thing's shall get better...:) |
| On December 29th 2006 Lzimmerman12 Said : | |
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jeez.. what is with you people "slits on wrist" bleeding wrist'
its all been said before.. can we try to be a little more creative??
i am sorry u feel so sad though. i am just not feeling the poetry if u want an honest opinion |
| On December 29th 2006 Lzimmerman12 Said : | |
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jeez.. what is with you people "slits on wrist" bleeding wrist'
its all been said before.. can we try to be a little more creative??
i am sorry u feel so sad though. i am just not feeling the poetry if u want an honest opinion |
