Another world
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Created on 11-29-06
When the devil is god
And god is real
When pain means pleasure
But you dont feel
When your anamosity
Means that your my friend
When you say begining
You really mean the end
When popularity leaves you
Old and alone
When feelings are accepted
And never controlled
When all love their life
And dead trees grow
When life is looked for
And death is unknown
Please Login to post comments| On September 9th 2007 kidnapthefat22 Said : | |
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My favorite part of this must of been the last four lines. |
| On May 8th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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wow, this is really thoughtful. Well done, you have talent. |
| On December 11th 2006 ChantelAlexis Said : | |
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Wow. Well written. Great poem. |
| On December 1st 2006 CoreyLover16 Said : | |
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it could be better sorry.... |
| On December 1st 2006 LaveMoofin333 Said : | |
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It's a good poem. It has alot to say about whats real and what most people think should be. |
