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Created on 8-18-07
Is it June or is it July?
I don't know how long it's been
Since I cried
Every day ticks away slowly
I know I'm moving but I'm not
Moving quickly
Am I happy?
Am I sad?
All the good things
Seem so bad
Why do I always hold on
When it's time
To let go ?
Where are all the people I know?
Please don't say they left me
On my own
I have some but it's not enough
God, I'm weak, though they tell me
That I'm tough
Am I freezing?
Am I burning?
All the seasons
Empty and yearning
Why do I always let go
When I need
To hold on ?
Is it early?
Is it late?
Everyone is
Feeling so great
Why do I try to hold on
When you want me
When I need to
Let go .
I don't know how long it's been
Since I cried
Every day ticks away slowly
I know I'm moving but I'm not
Moving quickly
Am I happy?
Am I sad?
All the good things
Seem so bad
Why do I always hold on
When it's time
To let go ?
Where are all the people I know?
Please don't say they left me
On my own
I have some but it's not enough
God, I'm weak, though they tell me
That I'm tough
Am I freezing?
Am I burning?
All the seasons
Empty and yearning
Why do I always let go
When I need
To hold on ?
Is it early?
Is it late?
Everyone is
Feeling so great
Why do I try to hold on
When you want me
When I need to
Let go .
Please Login to post comments| On October 12th 2007 halfpint21106 Said : | |
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very good |
| On October 10th 2007 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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THUMBS UP. I like this poem ALOT its very well written and I love the feel of it, very up and down, something anyone can relate to. |
| On August 22nd 2007 lalaloca2 Said : | |
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why are you so good at this? i cant rite a poem for poop. this is nice =] |
| On August 18th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said : | |
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i like ur poems! they're really good! |
