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Created on 2-24-08
i go by like the undead
following routine
never stepping out of line
doing what i need and nothing more
a smile when needed
a laugh when appropriate
a friendly comment here and there
all given on cue
without a second thought
just to fool the outside world
though on the inside its chaos
all this effort put in
to be someone i'm not
though i must be a master
at this skill, which is easy to perfect
no one looks around the smile
no one hears behind the laugh
Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2008 goldfishmurder Said : | |
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I don't get the undead part though... I'm thinking the traditional undead like zombies and stuff. I have never seen one laugh, though, I dare say, I have wanted to. |
| On August 14th 2008 goldfishmurder Said : | |
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Hmm, good feel to this. Has a depressed overtone. Well, hell the words are depressing. Sort of contradiction, a good feeling depressing work. |
| On March 5th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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I LIKE THIS ONE A LOT..KEEP IT UP YOU ARE VERY GOOD....♥ |
