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Created on 2-24-08
it consumes me
it controls me
it never lets me out of its grip
how much i love it
how much i hate it
such an evil deed
i should not know
its not helping
its depressing me even further
but i've fallen for its trap
held captive by the power
like a force pulling me back
a prisoner of the feeling
one that never goes away completely
Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2008 goldfishmurder Said : | |
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Never goes away completely... What are you talking about here? I mean whats the poem about? |
| On March 5th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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YOU ARE VERY GOOD..YOU SHOULD MAKE MORE POEMS .. YOU GOT TALENT ..♥ |
