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hopeless

Views (234) Pain Created on 7-18-07 Flag

am i the only one, the only one trying,

do you even care? or is this all just dying,

do i have a reason for all that do?,

or is it just me living in a world of my own dreams,

wishing its true when its all just a lie,

wishing its you, but your love will die,

all these worry’s they haunt me,

they haunt me to the bone,

rip me apart and then remind as i go,

but now ill forget this,

i must let this go,

its killing me inside,

but i wont let it show that now im not trying,

im done with this game,

ill let you show me this is real and not pretend,

i wont waist my time trying to help something that’s hopeless,

when it takes two to do this,

and you’ve dropped the other side,

well ill never forget this,

and im sorry i couldn’t be perfect,

but at least I can say i tried.

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On March 9th 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said :
ridinbitch0807 great job! this poem is really good!
On July 24th 2007 2innocent4u Said :
2innocent4u I love this poem
On July 23rd 2007 ember114 Said :
ember114 sad to say you continue to write things that are happening in my life so i can deeply relate to them
On July 20th 2007 windrising Said :
windrising sounds sad...
On July 20th 2007 mazblondie Said :
mazblondie fantastic poem,well written with deep emotion.
On July 19th 2007 stics917 Said :
stics917 dude i love this poem :]
On July 18th 2007 Hellcro Said :
Hellcro 'they haunt me to the bone' is my favorite line, I love it. Its so smooth
On July 18th 2007 Javellef Said :
Javellef Your poem is very insightful and emotional. I like the last line, "but at least I can say I tried"
On July 18th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 Wow.. I love it. Great job, I got chills while reading it.