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Created on 7-18-07

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Its not hopeless, but its not what it seems,

although I give up, but im not giving everything

Our love is still there, right now its just blinded

by the seen, but ive become weak, I

Wont be the one to fix this, it will never be same

until you show me, show me this isn’t the end ,

Show me you still love me, show me you still care,

show me that your love isn’t going to wear,

Show me that your true, show me this isn’t the end

you’ve got to be strong because until then nothing will be the same,

but if you give up now it will all die in vain,

it will never be the same not until you show me the way,

I know its hard but try to be strong, lead me to somewhere better,

somewhere we haven’t gone, show me your loyal, show me your true,

show me how to be strong , show me how to believe in you,

show me your love, show me your pain,

show me everything that’s there and right in-between ,

because im broken, im broken so deep and I just wont be the same,

not tell you show me what this love could really be.

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On September 21st 2007 1234fukdaw0r1d Said :

	O,M,G, I LOVE THIS POEM I CAN TOTALLY RELATE... THAT IS GREAT, THIS IS MY FAVORITE OF ALL OF UR POEMS!!!!! rYHAN

On July 23rd 2007 ember114 Said :

	wow yet again i love it and it reminds me of my current situation

On July 20th 2007 windrising Said :

	Not bad. Seems like someone that's in love, but something's struggling...whether it be love in general or one of the persons.

On July 18th 2007 Javellef Said :

	You did a great job of showing the difficulties of holding on to love when you are not sure if the other person's love is true. I think we all want to be shown that love is true in the relationships that we are in.

On July 18th 2007 sadee309 Said :

	oops sorry that was spose to be me lol but yeah.. sorry