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Created:
07/18 2007
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301
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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Broken |
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Fear in faith |
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still frame |
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show me |
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hopeless |
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A Love Forgoten. |
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Faded |
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Its Still There, I Promise |
still frame
Its cloudy and cold as the rain drips away,
all signs of life is dim as the sun hides
and the brightness starts to fade,
in my room there’s darkness as linger in the shade,
my memories begin to haunt me as they play there images in my face,
my memories are all I see, its all I have left,
a life in the past full of regrets,
my memories they last there for hours on end,
I sit there and watch them as time starts to bend,
hours turn to minutes,
minute’s turn to days, my lifetime has ended,
October 3 was the day.
| On July 24th 2007 2innocent4u Said: |
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| Nice |
| On July 24th 2007 2innocent4u Said: |
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| Nice |
| On July 24th 2007 2innocent4u Said: |
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| Nice |
| On July 23rd 2007 ember114 Said: |
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| awsome |
| On July 22nd 2007 ausjo Said: |
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| This is my fave. Good work. |
| On July 19th 2007 dhympLet Said: |
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| you have the ability to let the readers feel the sadness through your words and that makes you a great poet..^_^ nice job. |
| On July 18th 2007 Hellcro Said: |
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| its very beautiful in a saddening way, but its good. |
| On July 18th 2007 lollypops120 Said: |
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| good poem :) |
| On July 18th 2007 fgggfx Said: |
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| nice |
| On July 18th 2007 Javellef Said: |
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| There is a sadness in your words, but also beauty in the way you desribe memories. Nice work! |


